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WARNING: GRAMMAR ERROR.
Correct me if I'm wrong.
P/S : Think twice before
read my story. My English kinda bad. I'm sorry for a thousand times. Okay ?
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EDITED BY HILMAN.
"Big bro,let's hang out together. I miss
spending my time with you."
"I'm sorry. I know today is the day, but
I'm busy with my work dear. I can't spend my time with you."
I held his hand tight. "Please. Just for an
hour. Will you?"
"Alright then, we will return home in
the next hour. Please do not disturb your brother when he is doing his work
okay? Promise me that. Do we have a deal?" Adam sighed.
I bite my lip. Should I take his deal or
non? Which he mentioned to not disturb him while he is doing his work for an hour.
I looked at his face. " I only have one brother. Of course I will not
disturb you again. And yeah deal! So,let's go now."
"Are you kidding me? You want me to
hang out with you while I'm in my pyjamas? Oh.My.God. It's so embarrassing,
my little girl." Adam pouted.
I rolled my eyes and sat down on the
couch." I give you ten minutes. Starting from now! Hurry." I smiled.
"Can we buy some chocolates? I want
it."
"No," Adam bent down to look at me. He
holds my hand. "You already ate the whole candy for yourself. No more
chocolates. No more sweets."
"Please.. I want chocolates," I
begged him.
My big brother had brown hair, hazel eyes like
our father and he's the sweetest guy that I ever had. I'm so lucky to have him
in my life. Thanks goodness for everything. He keeps looking at me. "I
will buy you a teddy. You like it?"
I sighed, turning over my eyes and finally I
nodded. I know, I can't get candy from him. Whether you like or not, you should
accept it; whatever he gave to you. So here I was, standing with my big brother
while waiting, he bought a teddy bear for me.
Adam grinned again. "This teddy is so
cute." Suddenly, a beautiful young woman stood in front of Adam. She had
beauty face. Beautiful face, and I love her grin. "Oh hey, Maya. So glad
to meet you here." Maya kissed Adam on the cheek and they hugged.
Then he turned to me. He laughed and punched me in the shoulder.
"Your little sister?"
Adam nodded yes. "Maya this is Bella. She's
my little girl." I smiled at them while kissing Maya on the cheek.
"Hey girl. Let's hug, Bella"Maya
grinned. I laughed and hugged her tightly. He simply gave me an innocent look.
"Oh come on, little girl. Give her chance to talk with me."
"So," Maya pushed her hair behind her
ear. "How long have you and Elie been dating?"
I sit down in front of them. I don't want to
disturb them too much. I hugged the teddy bear tightly. Their story was not on
my business. I don't know about it and I don't want to know. All I want is my
big brother.
"We're already breaking up. Why are you
asking me this question?"Adam took.
Maya laughed softly. "Nah, I just want to
know. I'm so glad that you two have already broken up."
Adam gave her an innocent look. "What do
you mean? Are you happy?"
"You know what. I'm still waiting for
you for two years. Why you don't understand me?"
Adam glared at me then turned to her. "I
think, you should forget me and keep moving on. You can find sweetest guy out
there. They're awesome than me. You already died in my love story. Past is
past, Maya. I can't accept you. Please."
Maya holds his hand. "Give me a second
chance and everything will change."
"It's will be different. I don't
have any feeling with you. I'm sorry."
Adam walked past her and took hold of my hand.
"Hey little girl. You know what; love is pain. Love hits you feel light
and present you a pain. Don't ever try to fall in love with anyone else. I'd
never want you to feel that way. I don't want to see your ugly face. I don't
want to see you cry. And don't you ever bother to mention the three words if
you didn't want to hear them from others' mouths." He put his hand on his
heart.
I shook my head slowly. I still don't
understand. "Three word?"
"Yes. I love you and I hate you. Got
it?"
"Pinky swear, big brother. I will never
ever let my heart to fall for anybody, just like I've promised."I nodded.
Don't you ever bother to mention the three words if you didn't want to hear them from others' mouths.
10 comments:
Best! I like it so much! Please write some more story. Fighting! ^_^
Love to hang out here~~ :)
boleh tahan lah miss ^^ Your english pun not bad.. Sy still boleh faham sampai habis ! keep it up XD Nanti kalo ad new story, no worries.. just tell me okeyh :)
cool! like it..
Good try,takde la teruk mane,tapi best jugak cerita ni..hehe
best lah. sebab senang paham and jalan cerita yg menarik. good try. keep it up heee. ^^
plot dia menarik.. boleh panjangkan lagi ni.. :)
nice try dear !! fighting!!!
Woah syu! You didnt tell me youre a writer! Lepas ni boleh publish buku buku cinta pulak ye :p
NICE! ^^
woaaaah woooaaahh ! You wrote it in english ! ToT kita sendiri takda courage nak buat in english ! Well done sis !!!
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