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WARNING : GRAMMAR ERROR. Correct me if I'm mistaken.
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"Wake up, little girl. You
should open your eyes now." Adam woke me up. I took out my blanket and
cover myself. It's so cold here today!
I open my eyes slowly. My sight
was blurred for a few second. The first thing I saw was Adam's face; he
was so near to mine. He grinned and I pinch his cheek. "Ugh, damn it! It's
hurt ,sleepy girl!" No one dares to wake me up from my sleep, except
my great brother!
"Aw, come on. You are so
messy. Your hair.... Oh my. You are so ugly."
"I know right. Yea, I'm
ugly. Now, get out of my way, idiot!" I replies and threw my pillow at
him.
"Okay, okay. Keep your room
clean, okay?"
"All right, brother."I
replied while rolling my eyes.
I stare at him for only a second
before taking shower. "Brother, I keep thinking. Why you don't want to
fall in love once more? Don't you think it is fun?" I demanded.
Adam stayed quiet, not wanting to
yell at her. He spread out his mouth to explain. "I had told you before
right? It will probably make you cry. Make you feel so weak. I don't want to
feel it anymore. It's really hurting me inside. Do you still remember when I'm
alone? I don't want to talk with you for three months. Do you understand now? I
didn't mean it to be like that. It is just because of her, I am changed. You
are so lucky because you never felt it before."
I nodded and grinned. "Hey
messy girl. You should take a shower now. Stinky girl."
I just laughed and shook my head.
"Ah, no way! Now, please come out."
.
.
.
I blinking quickly and looked at
my mother. Wow, she looks so angry. I got my big smile to her, but I guess she
doesn't like it. Oh no, she was so angry.
"Hey, Princess Bella.
Why are you waking up so late in at Monday's morning? Have a sweet
dream?"
"Um,me...
Just....W...I...can't sleep."
"Ha ha. Very funny. Sayings
that don't make sense."She faked a laugh. "I won't you be late
for school!"
"Aw, give me fifteen
minutes." I whined and hold her hand.
"No."
"But,mom-"
"Ah, Bella. All right. You
have ten minutes for breakfast. Don't eat slowly."
"Thank you mom." I
kissed on her cheek and quickly ran to the kitchen. My mother was a very strict person. Everyone knows, she has a good attitude. She has brown hair,
blue eyes and nice person. She always told me to follow her time table that she
did by herself. Sometime, I feel frustrated with my life. Sometimes she is okay,
but sometimes she is not okay.
My mother glanced at me. Her eyes
were back on the road. I sigh heavily. "Okay mom,
I will go now. Okay." I grabbed my backpack and leave.
.
.
.
I narrowed my eyes at my iPhone. Strong hands take my iPhone
from my hand. Damn it man. What's
his problem, anyway? I was stuck with Danny. He was looking at me and got to
stand next to me.
"What do you want
huh?"
"A...a..." that all
Danny said, confusing me. "M...m.."
"Ergh." I take my iPhone back from his hand. He suddenly
grinned at me. I and him entered the room. Everyone was staring
at us. Some laughed and imagined it was a prank. I stopped short in the
doorway. Flora run toward me.
"I'm sorry, Bel. I guess,
you should sit with that guy."
My eyes turn to big. What? That guy? I am never seated with any guy, but this year I should sit with a guy.
"Why? I should sit with you,
right?"
She slowly shook her head.
"Nope. Er, Fraye took a
place with me. Sorry."
I nodded and slowly walked over
to the desk. I took my seat behind him. Ok, well. He doesn't look at me also
doesn't say hi to me. Weird.
"Hey Danny."
"H...h...i..."
"Oh, don't be like that.
It's weird."
5 comments:
big clap :D
good try :) *thumbs up
Nice interesting. Chaiyok !
heeheehee :D
bila lagi nak mencuba kan?kalau dah cuba bole tahu camana....ur english is not bad.... (Y)
amik TESL nnti ye kat universiti nnti :D
wau nice!!!
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